Were joining Battle Frontier. Everyones joining Battle Frontier. I dont even know what Battle Frontier is about. I just hope Ive done this right.
ROUND ONE it's all about following rules, ohgod.
No doubt Im gonna maybe have to edit a couple of things in here one I have a fresh pair of eyes, I put this together wayyy to fast. Obligatory Wall-of-Text, go!
Timmy is a small boy from Goldenrod Elementary school. Hes the third best in his class at reading, and got 87/100 in last weeks maths test. Despite his young age, hes more than qualified to take on Professional Trainers and Coordinators in the Battle Arena. Most of his Pokémon are from his neighborhood, and truthfully, hes never really been in a Pokémon battle before. His Mom says that as long as he does his best, shell be proud of him. But then again, she thinks hes going to a Spell-a-thon, and not going to battle Pokémons..
His babysitter Irene is going to be looking after him while he's competing. She is his hero ♥.
~Premier Balls [2]: A man dressed like a clown was giving them away! ~Oran Berry [1]: Its squashed from sitting in his pocket all week. ~Money: But not allowed to spend it all on candys! ~Note from mom: [contains personal important information] ~Toy airplane: In case he gets bored.
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Caterpie | Bug Chou [♂] King of the Turtles. ~Ability: Shield Dust String Shot Tackle Bug Bite Snore --> Hes my best friend, and hes the only Caterpie in the world who is actually a turtle. My teacher helped me make him his green shell in Art Class out of Papier Mache.
Gastrodon | Water/Ground Joey [♀] Serious ~Ability: Sticky Hold Frustration [TM21] Hidden Power [ghost] Mud Bomb Sludge Bomb --> One day me and my friend Joey were playing by the lake, but she fell in and got eaten by a Gastrodon. We tamed it and named it after her, but its scary so we make it sleep in the shed.
Zigzagoon | Normal Bulle [♂] Lax ~Ability: Pickup Whirlpool Cut Superfang Icy Wind --> Hes soft and fun to play with because he likes to blow bubbles in the bath. Mum doesnt like him though because hes lazy and just lies on the carpet all day.
Beedrill | Bug/Poison Jellybee [♀] Timid ~Ability: Swarm Solarbeam [TM22] Attract [TM45] Fury Attack Poison Jab --> She lives in the tree in my backyard. Shes scared of a lot of things and carries a bucket of honey wherever she goes. Its very heavy. (a Beedrill and her bucket!)
Dragonite [From the first Movie] | Dragon/Flying -- [♂] Important ~Ability: Inner Focus Extremespeed Dragon Rush Thunderbolt [TM24] Hyperbeam [TM15] --> Hes our mailman, we needed a last Pokemon to get into Battle Frontier, and I traded him my collection of bottle caps so that he would promise to help me. He has to work on weekdays though.
Drifloon | Ghost/Flying Puddle [♂] Violated ~Ability: Aftermath Shadowball [TM30] Body Slam Chargebeam [TM57] Gust --> He was once an evil Pokémon who we found floating down the street one day. He tried to steal Sally Atmore away, but we stopped him by filling him up with water! Now were best friends and he plays with us everyday!
Yeah ^^ It's mostly clicking eggs and stuff and collecting events, but I adore the rp's I am in and I need to check them every day because they are all active ^3^
I don't critique much, but this particular profile really irks me. He's ten and he has a Dragonite. But for his main Pokemon it's a fucking Caterpie. A level 75 CATERPIE. And some of these have just weird explanations to how he got them, such as the Drifloon and the Gastrodon. I don't understand what's so SUPER KAWAII about it because the info is bullshit and so is the character. He also has a ridiculous weight for his height and age. It's not well researched, and it really bothers me that so many people like it when it obviously has some work that needs putting into it.
What? He's ten and the Dragonite is his friend. I think this is a hell of a lot more "realistic" than every other Pokemon trainer: who is 10 and has not only a Dragonite, but a Charizard and a Raichu and an Umbreon and a Garchomp and a Mewtwo etcetcetc.
This however was all justified in the previous description; however, as it was for a competition/tournament, I was forced to tweak the descriptions, tweak levels (as the 75/70/65/60/55/50 were imposed on us), and tweak the age of the Character who was supposed to younger, hence the weight/height/age ratio imbalance.
Soyeah, I deeply apologize that I didn't fill my team full of Eevee's, or give him a cape and make him Supreme Dragon Master of the Universe. This was really just meant as a joke -a bit of fun ya'know- and clearly I'm to blame for not making (what I thought were) overwhelmingly obvious factors that deliberately makes no sense, more obvious.
I say ignore RiotSlugs.....Your character is pretty neat even though the profile isn't "perfect" but my character isn't either SO LET THERE BE IMPERFECTIONS! and I don't mean to get into your business or anything but Riotslug's comment really fudgin othered me. I mean like its your character you can do whatever you want with it.
it looks great btw =3
Thankss
He's ten and he has a Dragonite.
But for his main Pokemon it's a fucking Caterpie.
A level 75 CATERPIE.
And some of these have just weird explanations to how he got them, such as the Drifloon and the Gastrodon.
I don't understand what's so SUPER KAWAII about it because the info is bullshit and so is the character.
He also has a ridiculous weight for his height and age.
It's not well researched, and it really bothers me that so many people like it when it obviously has some work that needs putting into it.
This however was all justified in the previous description; however, as it was for a competition/tournament, I was forced to tweak the descriptions, tweak levels (as the 75/70/65/60/55/50 were imposed on us), and tweak the age of the Character who was supposed to younger, hence the weight/height/age ratio imbalance.
Soyeah, I deeply apologize that I didn't fill my team full of Eevee's, or give him a cape and make him Supreme Dragon Master of the Universe. This was really just meant as a joke -a bit of fun ya'know- and clearly I'm to blame for not making (what I thought were) overwhelmingly obvious factors that deliberately makes no sense, more obvious.
and I don't mean to get into your business or anything but Riotslug's comment really fudgin othered me. I mean like its your character you can do whatever you want with it.